Saturday, May 1, 2010

As Story with Non - Sensical Sense

Well, storytelling is an art. And ppl attempts to create a story with a logic, but whether they pass or fail in the process is a fun in itself. So here is a story made up by story tellers. TM, TK and PA


TM: we are starting a story; next person will say one sentence; the other another sentence; it should be logical.TK u start.
PA: haan start kar
TK: once upon a time there was this girl.
PA: who used to love dreaming
TM: about this girl called
TK: Naina, her daughter
TM. :): who was sleeping
TK. :): in her tummy ever since she started dreaming
PA. :): every single night, just one scene came in front of eyes...
TM .:): oh that guy who loved her
TK .:): whom she dreamt of spending her life with, enacting every scene in her mind
TK ..:): perfect, the way she wanted it to be
PA ..:): laughing and chuckling to herself for he must have done that he must have said that
TM .:): about the pressure cooker in the kitchen
TK .:): then abruptly stopping all those thoughts, realizing and being afraid that she might never get him
PA ..:): but every morning she rose up with a new hope
PA ..:): a hope of being with him
PA ..:.): a hope of having him beside her
TM .:): a hope of getting him wash her clothes and his too
TK .:): together they washed clothes and did all the chores in her dream world
PA .:): where they both used to throw water at each other
TM .:): and also cook food
TK .:): and read and write and serve the society, but
PA .:.): but coming back to the reality, they were not with each other
TM .:): because he was with another guy
TK .:): who was his dad, and he was close to him and he didn’t want him to be with that girl
PA .:): and he had to chose, between his responsibilities and his love for her
TM .:): and also between Suzie and Ramona
TK .:): and he was very confused, he couldn’t decide how and on which basis to take the decision
PA .:): Susie and Ramona were his unmarried sisters
TM .:): who were believed to be vampires
TK .:): by the society around them which was all crazy, for society is a very crazy thing
TM .:): and could not say whether it is a boy, girl or other

TK .:.): despite all that he loved her, loved her purely
PA .:): the sonogram was done, it was a baby boy
TM .:): yet she did not know the name of the father of the boy
TK ..:): she had fallen in love with him on the fst sight, the name was insignificant, so were the other details
PA .:7): there was no need for knowing the name of the father, for she knew his smell, his touch and most importantly his recognized his soul
PA .:): she*
TM .:): which was no different et all from her previous boyfriend and the one before him
TK .:): which were all the same man, his different phases, sometimes caring, sometimes funny et al
PA .7:): yet she was always unsure whether it’s enough to sustain the lovely bond of love between them?
TM .:): or should she go and do shop in the supermarket for some grocery
TK .:): so that she can make delicious dishes for him when he comes to meet her
PA .:): or should she fill the room with rose petals all across
TM .:): now everyone knows that rose petals come from roses that are grown in gardens
TK .:.): and they have great fragrance that give a different kind of peace
TK .:): gives
PA .:): a different kind of emotion, a different feeling of love
TM .:): just like raj and riya used to have
TK .:): when they went to their balcony where they had lots of rose plants of different colours
PA .:): when they used to look at each other's eyes, even the roses smiled with jealousy
PA .:): in*
TM .:): and even jealous was raj auntie opposite door
TK ..:): for she also remembered her moments spent wid Raj's uncle, who now a days was lost consuming liquor day and night
PA looking at them one evening, she was reminded of her very first kiss, when both of them were very young
TM .:.): and raju the chaiwala was staring at them
TK .:): with the two glasses of chai in his hand, for it was raining and they had stopped for chai at his stall amongst the greenery all around
PA .:): even before the chai could be served, they were done
TM .:): and then the scene changes to story of the white sari clad girl named chandrakanta
TK .:): who lost her husband in the war
PA .:): the war between US and Russia
TM .:): and between Iceland and Fire land
TK .:): and then the scene changes to tushar eating bhelpuri
PA .:): and not sharing it with Tamm and PA
TM .:): but sharing it with the chandrakanta who is now wearing white sari
TK .:): even though chandraknta has already finished her plate of bhelpuri

1 comments:

  1. And And And
    In the end, all, PA, TM and TK, and Chandrakanta, and Raju the chaiwala and Naina, and Raj and Riya, and Susie and Ramona(they got married), the opposite waalie aunty(her hubby stopped drinking:D ), and yeah, the bhelpuri waley bhaiyya,
    LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER
    :D:D:D
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